Genre:
YA Historical
Word Count: 60,000
Pitch: 17yo Jenny discovers that the mother who abandoned her
is the Red Lady pirate. When her mother is imprisoned, Jenny must decide to
either rescue her or let her swing from King Henry’s noose.
Excerpt:
The ship stole
into the harbor just after dark. I happened to be looking out the upstairs
window at the full moon reflected on the blue black water. I liked how the
image wavered back and forth as the waves moved. Was the ship a reflection of
the light?
I blinked and the
image vanished. Thinking I had imagined it, I turned back to the room with the
cleaning rag in my hand, I jumped. Meg watched me from the doorway.
“Girl? You
dreaming again? Get to work before I whip you.” Meg flew at me with her hand
raised.
I ducked and
scurried out of her way. I ran down the stairs taking two at a time.
“Get back here,
girl.”
Meg was old and
had a substantial girth so I knew she would not be able to catch me. I giggled
as I rounded the corner and ran smack into Thomas, who carried a full tray of
goblets filled to the brim with ale. Of course they spilled all over him, me
and the floor. I landed on my bottom, my dress soaked.
He glared at
me.
“Fetch me six
goblets of ale and take them to the table by the window.” Thomas shook himself
like a dog would, sending more droplets of the nasty smelling brew all over me.
“I smell like ale,” I
wailed as I wrung out a handful of hair dripping with the stuff. I stood and
tried to get around him but he caught my arm.
$50!!!!!
ReplyDeleteSo fun! Congrats on your request!
ReplyDeleteFun and strong start! I'm happy you got a request.
ReplyDeleteI love pirate stories - and I forgot them on my wish list. The pitch just had me all ga ga. Two strong female characters and I'm left wondering if Jenny will follow in her mother's footsteps - love stories that make me think about what could be the ending. I also know of an editor chasing pirate stories and I reckon other editors will want them too - so I'm hoping Jordy loves it and finds a home for this MS.
ReplyDeleteYou had me at pirates. Especially lady pirates. Love the pitch, the writing, the voice...I want more.
ReplyDeleteAbandoned by Red lady pirate? Too clever. Well written mother/daughter stories tend to capture my heart and this concept is terrific!
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